Topic: water pollution
Topic sentences: water pollution is dangerous for human life
and aquatics
Supporting detail: -kill life that inhabit water base
ecosystem
-people can diseases
-No sources
of clean water
Conclusion: everyone must work together to maintain the
cleanliness of water to prevent or protect from contamination.
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Paragraph
Water is
most important for human being, but there are some people that have not
responsibility to protect the water, so that it will become water pollution. This
occur causes from human being. Water pollution is so dangerous for human life
and also aquatics. There are many effects for human and aquatics from this
pollution. Firstly are people will get dieses? For example, when people eating such as fish,
oyster, prawn, and octopus from the pollution they will get diseases there
already contain the chemical. Then from the water pollution, they will kill life
that is habit water based ecosystem. Water pollution also occurs from factory. So
that the aquatic will kill because water from factory also contain the
chemical. The lastly are, there is no clean water sources. If all water will
become polluted, then the human hard to get the clean water. In conclusion,
everyone must work together to maintain the cleanliness of water to prevent or
protect from contamination.
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